Friday, 4 October 2013

(3) Narative charachter building

Number 7  
He was an African American man in his late forties. He wore a pale blue suit accented by the golden watch he wore tightly on his dark hand.A hand, that had clearly endured the strains of a working man's lifestyle. The matching trousers of his suit appeared to be worn at the knees. He walked slowly;  with a slight limp impeding his progress. Despite the yells to stop he calmly reached deep in to his pockets. He would be found the next morning, clutching the number 7 in his hand.





Direct: Working mans hands, Nice watch and Suit, Limp


Indirect: The Fact that his suit was damaged. The fact that he refused to stop and remained completely calm.

1 comment:

  1. Brilliant best thing you have ever written not even sarcasm make it a book. Love the style.

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